Readers are much more likely to remember your message if your words resonate with a powerful experience, emotion or memory. You might mention a relatable human experience that your product plays a part in. Or you might address the excitement, hope or uncertainty that comes with the buying process. Try to get beyond the facts of your offer and enter the real world that your readers live in.
Try this
For each key message, ask: "How does this make the reader feel?" If the answer is "nothing," rewrite.
Ideas
Open a ten-minute sprint with Emotion as your prompt.