First, you must get a reader’s attention, then capture their interest before arousing desire and, finally, encouraging action. Where does your copy fit into this chain? Are your words intended to take readers on a complete journey or just move consumers to the next stage? Search for ‘AIDA marketing model alternatives’ if the classic version doesn’t ignite your imagination.
From Attributed to E. St. Elmo Lewis in The Psychology of Selling and Advertising by Edward K. Strong
Try this
Map your copy to the four stages: which paragraph grabs Attention? Which builds Interest? Where's the Desire? Where's the Action?
Ideas
Open a ten-minute sprint with AIDA as your prompt.